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このブログは管理人の日々感じたことを気まぐれにつづったものです。言ってしまえば単なる自己満足。いつも「お尻ペンペン」に関することとは限らないけど、立ち寄っていただけるとハッピーです。

まだ五月(もう五月)ですが初夏を通り越して夏そのもののような暑さ。今日なんかは蒸し暑いので気温がそんなに高くなくとも暑苦しさを覚えます。本番が思いやられますが意外に冷夏だったりするとそれはそれで寂しい感じがしたりして。そんなわがままなのは管理人だけ?

そんな今日この頃、新作

オルタナティブ・パニッシュメント パート1

オルタナティブ・パニッシュメント パート1

を公開開始しました!おなじみのみきさんとりなさんによる初のドメスティック(家庭もの)スパンキング作のパート1です。タイトルが示すように二部構成です。前週作も二部作のパート1だったのでちょっと落ち着かない感じですが滅多にないパターンなのでお許しください。「台本から…」が下剋上的な内容に関して本作はオーソドックスな内容。なお家庭ものと書きましたが親子ものではなく叔母と姪設定です。

本作は過去に何度もアイデアを投稿いただいている海外ユーザーAnso氏による台本です。原題も「Alternative Punishment」。日本語のタイトル付けはちょっと迷いました。Alternativeという言葉は「代替の」とか「二者択一の」とか言う意味の形容詞でなかなか訳しにくいボキャブラリなんです。要するに、~する代わりにお仕置きを受けてもらう、みたいな意味だと思うのですが。ま、いろいろ迷ったあげくそのまま原題をカタカナ表記にするだけにしました。Alternativeという言葉も少しは定着しつつあるってことで←ホントか? Alternative Rockとか?

台本ですが例によって氏特有の作風、こだわりがあります。室内で必ずヒールの靴を履いているとか、必ずストレートチェア(背もたれがまっすぐで肘掛がない)でのOTKであることなど。室内でハイヒールなどは日本ではちょっと馴染めない習慣ですがたまに海外でのお仕置きスタイルにこだわるって悪くないかもしれません。

本パートではお仕置きに至るまでの流れがかなり長めに描かれます。メインのお仕置きシーンはパート2になるためパート1のお仕置き=スパンキングは着衣(スカートの上から)のみで正直物足りなく映ってしまうと思います。予めご容赦くださいませm(__)m

ただユーザー様の中にはお尻ペンペンそのものよりそれに至るまでの行程に重きを置かれる方も少なからずいらっしゃると思います。ストーリーの流れについてはそちらが本パートのキモになりますのでここでは書きません。ぜひ動画本編で確認してくださいね~

長くなりますが今回も掲示板に頂いた原案を貼っておきますね。英文ですが宜しかったらお読みください。読むとネタバレしちゃいますけどね(笑)。

Alternative punishment

Hello everybody,
My name is A. and I am going to tell you what happened to me yesterday.
The last few weeks I have been staying with my aunt and I am having a good time there. That is to say: until yesterday. This is how it went:

Aunt: ‘A., I am going to do some shopping. Are you coming with me?’
‘Sorry, aunt, not this time. I want to stay here and write a letter home.’
Aunt: ‘Very well, I won’t be long. A few hours at the most. Then we can have tea and I’ll cook you a nice dinner’.

As soon as aunt leaves, A. hurries to the liquor cabinet and inspects the bottles.
A (to herself): That’s quite a collection of drinks. Where shall I start? I think I’ll take this bottle of red wine. There are soo many that she won’t miss one’.
A. Unscrews the bottle and gets herself a glass. She pours herself a large glass of the wine. The moment she brings it to her lips, she hears the front door being opened and her aunt’s voice sounds from the hall:

‘A, I am back. I forgot my credit card.’
A. In panic takes hold of the bottle and hurries to the liquor cabinet to put it away, but in her haste she knocks over the glass on the table. It crashes on the floor, spilling its content. At that moment aunt enters the room. At first she is speechless, but then she cries:
‘You naughty creature, clean up this mess at once. I’ll get you a towel.’.
A. takes the towel to start cleaning. We have a nice view of her bottom in the tight skirt, when she bends down to reach the floor and again when she crawls on the floor to get on with her task. Aunt watches her silently, a severe look on her face. After A. has finished, she says:

‘I am really angry with you and you can’t stay here any more. To-morrow I’ll drive you home’.
‘Oh, please aunt. I am very sorry and you are right to be angry, but please don’t send me home’.
‘Yes, you are going home. It is your own fault’.
‘Yes aunt, I agree, but if you send me home, my mother will be so ashamed. It will be punishment for her too and she has done nothing wrong’.
Aunt thinks for a moment. Then she says: ‘You have a point there. OK, you can stay here, but not without some alternative punishment’.
‘Thank you, aunt, I accept any kind of punishment you want to give me’.
‘Right. It has to wait till I come back from my shopping’.
Aunt leaves the house and A. is left to her thoughts.
A. (to herself): ‘I am really curious about what I can expect. I suppose she won’t be very severe with me. After a few hours her anger will have subsided. May be she’ll take away my smart phone for a day. Or forbid me to watch tv this evening. Something like that’.

Aunt returns. They have tea together, without any mentioning of punishment. But after tea:

Aunt: ‘Well now, young lady, go to the corner and face the wall’.
A.: Oh yes, my punisment. I have to stand in the corner, don’t I, just like a schoolgirl’.
While A. stands in the corner, aunt is going to another room and comes back with a straight chair. She installs herself on the chair and calls her niece.
‘Come here now ’.
A. turns around and sees her aunt waiting on the chair, her legs crossed. She begins to suspect something. When aunt uncrosses her legs and points to her lap, it is clear what is going to happen.
‘Are you going to spank me? But I’m a grown girl’.
‘Would you rather be sent home? No? Then come here right now!’.
A slowly moves in aunt’s direction. Aunt takes hold of her and takes her niece over the knee. She lies curved over her aunt’s lap, her pencil skirt tightly stretched over her bottom.
‘Oh, aunt, I feel so ashamed’.
‘Perfect, that’s part of the punisment’.
The next moment aunt’s hand goes high up into the air and a ferocious spanking starts. A. is clearly suffering. She laments and cries, but the spanking goes on and on, interupted only when aunt finds it necessary to pull her victim into the right position over her knee again. Finally Aunt stops and A. thinks the punishment is over, but she is sent to the corner again. After some time:
‘Young lady, we are going to continue. Take off your skirt’.
‘Oh, aunt please, it’s been enough; .
‘That is for me to decide. Come here!’
A. does not obey.
‘Very well, it seems that I have to come and get you. But first I shall find my ruler, It must be in a drawer somewhere here. A nice wooden ruler, very solid.’
At this threat A. obeys. She approaches her aunt.
‘I ordered you to take off your skirt’.
A. obeys again, hesitantly. Again she it taken over the knee this time protected only by her nylon panties. Another hard spanking starts. Aunt’s hand descends in a regular, fairly fast rhythm on the target and A. wails and cries even harder than before. In her agony she starts to struggle and aunt can hardly hold her in the right position. She stops.
‘Lie still. Take your punishment or else……Any more resistance and I’ll be even more severe’.
For a while A. lies still, but then she struggles again, trying to move her bottom away from under the punishing hand. Aunt stops once more, then takes the girl into a very firm grip, so that she can’t resist any more. Now she yanks down A’s panties. A ferocious bare bottom spanking follows, aunt’s hand coming down in quick succession. The sound of the smacks is earsplitting and A. cries at the top of her voice. After some 20 to 30 smacks the spanking is over and A. is released. The girl hoists her panties, grabs her skirt and flees the room.

Later that evening
The two ladies are having dinner and chatting as if nothing happened. But A. is still having a problem with sitting and moves uneasily in her chair. Aunt notices her discomfort and sends her an understanding smile.
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